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by ConcernedGamer
Mon Jun 24, 2019 1:28 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Chemical Mishap - A 'Male Reader x Pokémon' Fanfic
Replies: 0
Views: 4

A Chemical Mishap - A 'Male Reader x Pokémon' Fanfic

This here is my first mock of a non-crossover Pokémon fanfic, titled A Chemical Mishap, starring you . No, really, this is a 'Male Reader x Pokémon' fanfic, with the narration performing a second-person point of view, putting the reader of the story in the role of the protagonist. I knew of this Re...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Jun 24, 2019 1:17 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy
Replies: 49
Views: 4793

Re: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy

That entire chapter was the epitome example of convenience. Everyone had it convenient, only limited by the fact that only one faction could have it at a time. From how well the bad guys storm the building, to how somewhat high-ranking and named bad guys are mowed down or humiliated as easily as had...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun Jun 09, 2019 4:13 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 21
Views: 2619

Re: Inside Falls

I think it's clear enough to spot that the author can't keep anything she writes straight and makes this shit up along the way without consideration for future chapters. It has however never been clearer than in this chapter. Now we see how the author remembers that the shack has to be about more t...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun May 26, 2019 3:13 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 21
Views: 2619

Re: Inside Falls

Character limits on a forum can't be helped, I guess. Continue reading Part 2 of Hallowater here. --- "Chara,I just want to know something...",Frisk said to her sister as she walked out of the wall of the nearby house. "Why you are dressed like a mariachi?" I know I already harped on the costume ig...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun May 26, 2019 3:12 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 21
Views: 2619

Re: Inside Falls

I hate this chapter. Having mocked it now as I write this, I can't get around it. Verdict is that I hate this fanfic. I rarely hate. Very few fanfics I've mocked has earned that. So far, those who did, did so out of the depravity or self-indulgence of smut, objectification or downright character as...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun May 12, 2019 4:37 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 21
Views: 2619

Re: Inside Falls

The author is really pissing me off with how these Dreemurr twins are being portrayed purer than fresh snow, while at the same time unintentionally coming off as mental cases worth three different kinds of meds. This has led me to dedicating a seperate page in the chapter link section to laying out...
by ConcernedGamer
Thu Apr 18, 2019 4:49 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 21
Views: 2619

Re: Inside Falls

Part 2 post start here, previous part is just above. --- "Well,Temmie,lets help Pearl face off her Acrophobia. Also know as Operation PFOHA.", Because calling it LPPFHOA would have made it sound dirty. Frisk said for Temmie,showing to her a 'map' on the general plan,and many other alternate plans i...
by ConcernedGamer
Thu Apr 18, 2019 4:47 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 21
Views: 2619

Re: Inside Falls

We are ten chapters into this, with no deviation from a different but identical Gravity Falls plot railroad, with characters that don't act like who they are supposed to be, don't act like the characters they are replacing, or don't act like people in general. The fact that they act is dubious at b...
by ConcernedGamer
Sat Apr 13, 2019 7:31 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy
Replies: 49
Views: 4793

Re: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy

I typically find myself morbidly fascinated whenever I mock a fanfic with sex scenes in them, wondering at first what I'm in for, even when it's made by an author I've already seen produce some before, like here. Sometimes it's evidently so bland and note for note repeats of insert Peg A into Slot B...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun Mar 31, 2019 8:39 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 21
Views: 2619

Re: Inside Falls

Who doesn't enjoy a good time travel plot? They are however not without their issues, of course. Gravity Falls introduced a light-hearted take on the topic, where mostly the implications and/or complications were glossed over. Introducing time travel can lend a whole lot of plot holes and issues ab...