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by ConcernedGamer
Mon Oct 19, 2020 2:36 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 33
Views: 17459

Re: Inside Falls

Resuming Chapter 22. "Those parts of the laboratory of the bunker are wrecked down because of the lack of visitors I've been used to.",the woman explained to Lapis and Chara,still guiding them trough the wrecked laboratory. "So it's not decrepit here because of the creatures, it's all in decay beca...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Oct 19, 2020 2:34 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 33
Views: 17459

Re: Inside Falls

By now I must have given at least three different takes on how bad I consider this fanfic a failure at what it is going for. I want you for a moment to consider the core of literature; the decisions of an author. A narrative can only be shaped by that, and the story depends on every single one of t...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Sep 21, 2020 4:08 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 33
Views: 17459

Re: Inside Falls

I left this mock untouched and unread, just as I promised myself, for nearly a year. Ten months later, I am able to count the instances I've thought about this fanfic on one hand. And as impressive as that may sound, the fact that I can make a recollection accurate enough to produce that statement ...
by ConcernedGamer
Fri Jul 24, 2020 12:20 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: The guide - Pokémon interspecies mating tips. A collaborate mock by ConcernedGamer & StabbyKobold
Replies: 1
Views: 773

Re: The guide - Pokémon interspecies mating tips. A collaborate mock by ConcernedGamer & StabbyKobold

And now for Part 2 of this faux academic bestiality piece. The Relationship and Social Standing Before discussing the intricacies of interspecies intercourse, it's important for trainers to know what happens AFTER they have successfully become a lover to a Lopunny. Well, the mono-syllabic pillow ta...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun Jun 07, 2020 4:30 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: The guide - Pokémon interspecies mating tips. A collaborate mock by ConcernedGamer & StabbyKobold
Replies: 1
Views: 773

The guide - Pokémon interspecies mating tips. A collaborate mock by ConcernedGamer & StabbyKobold

Welcome to another mock by yours truly. And this time I'm not alone, as I am joined by StabbyKobold, a fellow mocker from the times of Project AFTER, who like myself host his mocks on a Wordpress webpage, that you can take a look at here whenever. He and I will be mocking this latest mess of fictio...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon May 18, 2020 1:10 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy
Replies: 88
Views: 51788

Re: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy

Congratulations on making it through to the other side on this literary wall of stupidity, GorillaGamer. You weren't kidding with the last chapter summing up everything wrong with the fic, as familiarity flowed throughout it, giving only credit to the consistency of the author's style of narratives....
by ConcernedGamer
Mon May 04, 2020 11:21 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Jet's Universe
Replies: 23
Views: 13560

Re: Jet's Universe

Oh, you thought I was done ranting about Jet? Think again. This chapter has made me realize just what kind of self-perpetuating Möbius strip of ruin this author is writing out. Let me tell you about this observed phenomenon that I probably have often seen, acknowledged, and piled together with othe...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun Apr 19, 2020 9:34 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Jet's Universe
Replies: 23
Views: 13560

Re: Jet's Universe

And we are back with this fanfic, starring the main cast chained to the canon of the show, written by an author that constantly and ignorantly fails to appropriately carry over the vital details, core terminology, motivations, and character development that would even allow the plot to stay as unal...
by ConcernedGamer
Tue Mar 31, 2020 1:30 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic
Replies: 9
Views: 5846

Re: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic

I know I've acknowledged this fanfic as unoriginal. The sad part is that by that I had at least hoped to not be bored. I'm glad this thing seemingly is at it's last chapter, because it is doing nothing for me anymore. It's not over the top. It's not self-indulgently crazy. Even the promised harem i...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Mar 16, 2020 2:27 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic
Replies: 9
Views: 5846

Re: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic

There's no point in going over what has happened. It's not like it matters to this author. Welcome to Retcon Hell. Here's Chapter 9. Sorry it took a while, this chapter was supposed to be Finished on Friday but my Internet was cut. Literarily, while moving some furniture around and cleaning up, the...