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by ConcernedGamer
Sun Jun 07, 2020 4:30 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: The guide - Pokémon interspecies mating tips. A collaborate mock by ConcernedGamer & StabbyKobold
Replies: 0
Views: 106

The guide - Pokémon interspecies mating tips. A collaborate mock by ConcernedGamer & StabbyKobold

Welcome to another mock by yours truly. And this time I'm not alone, as I am joined by StabbyKobold, a fellow mocker from the times of Project AFTER, who like myself host his mocks on a Wordpress webpage, that you can take a look at here whenever. He and I will be mocking this latest mess of fictio...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon May 18, 2020 1:10 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy
Replies: 88
Views: 42475

Re: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy

Congratulations on making it through to the other side on this literary wall of stupidity, GorillaGamer. You weren't kidding with the last chapter summing up everything wrong with the fic, as familiarity flowed throughout it, giving only credit to the consistency of the author's style of narratives....
by ConcernedGamer
Mon May 04, 2020 11:21 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Jet's Universe
Replies: 23
Views: 11521

Re: Jet's Universe

Oh, you thought I was done ranting about Jet? Think again. This chapter has made me realize just what kind of self-perpetuating Möbius strip of ruin this author is writing out. Let me tell you about this observed phenomenon that I probably have often seen, acknowledged, and piled together with othe...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun Apr 19, 2020 9:34 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Jet's Universe
Replies: 23
Views: 11521

Re: Jet's Universe

And we are back with this fanfic, starring the main cast chained to the canon of the show, written by an author that constantly and ignorantly fails to appropriately carry over the vital details, core terminology, motivations, and character development that would even allow the plot to stay as unal...
by ConcernedGamer
Tue Mar 31, 2020 1:30 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic
Replies: 9
Views: 5067

Re: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic

I know I've acknowledged this fanfic as unoriginal. The sad part is that by that I had at least hoped to not be bored. I'm glad this thing seemingly is at it's last chapter, because it is doing nothing for me anymore. It's not over the top. It's not self-indulgently crazy. Even the promised harem i...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Mar 16, 2020 2:27 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic
Replies: 9
Views: 5067

Re: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic

There's no point in going over what has happened. It's not like it matters to this author. Welcome to Retcon Hell. Here's Chapter 9. Sorry it took a while, this chapter was supposed to be Finished on Friday but my Internet was cut. Literarily, while moving some furniture around and cleaning up, the...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun Mar 01, 2020 1:53 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic
Replies: 9
Views: 5067

Re: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic

In the last chapter, we saw the plot piddle on with what apparently passes for conflict in this author's mind. Moronyx shatters a sentient creature able to process the thought of a threat against its life, which the author probably thought was just a-okay after proclaiming it was a defective gem we...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Feb 24, 2020 1:55 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic
Replies: 9
Views: 5067

Re: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic

Last chapter was spent with Moronyx walking out Jewel's door like she wasn't his enemy, Jewel calling her mom like Moronyx wasn't her enemy, and the Crystal Gems pissing their pants in fear and awe because Moronyx is their enemy. That's about it, aside from the constant polishing the author does on...
by ConcernedGamer
Tue Feb 18, 2020 3:17 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic
Replies: 9
Views: 5067

Re: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic

I can't even say that I need to analyze the former chapters any longer. The author has managed to attain enough coherence in his writing that it's more insulting than indecipherable. But I'll still sum it up for how stupid it was. After having been served the first bit of the Season 1 finale like a...
by ConcernedGamer
Thu Feb 06, 2020 12:02 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic
Replies: 9
Views: 5067

Re: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic

Chapter 4 gave us what was to be expected, honestly. Anyone half as savvy on bad fanfiction as me could see it coming. Canon plagiary, where the original character piddles around in the background, pretending that they exist. Before that happened, however, we also got served heavy-handed dribble me...