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by ConcernedGamer
Sun Dec 15, 2019 2:38 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic
Replies: 9
Views: 1942

A Crystal Rising - an unoriginal Steven Universe fanfic

I'm just going to start off by introducing you to the summary of this M-rated story, A Crystal Rising, by the author ImageViewer. It's brief, it's bland, it's about as generic as you can expect from a bad fanfic. A Steven Universe Fic: Blood onyx is a unique Gem unlike the rest of his fellow home w...
by ConcernedGamer
Thu Nov 28, 2019 11:10 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy
Replies: 80
Views: 25901

Re: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy

There are many things wrong with this fanfic, but its lack of consistent tone has to be one of the fundamental flaws at this point. What the hell was this chapter? Who the hell is supposed to be entertained by this and its entirety? The author is still cramming on ideas ad nauseum, admitting as much...
by ConcernedGamer
Tue Nov 19, 2019 2:45 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9565

Re: Inside Falls

Well, we're here now. Do you want to know when I started mocking this dumpster fire? The 11th of November in 2018. A year. It took me a year to chew through this diatribe of broken English, wasted source material, and identical plot lines. And of course this verse is the same as the first. Here's C...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Nov 04, 2019 12:55 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Chemical Mishap - A 'Male Reader x Pokémon' Fanfic
Replies: 4
Views: 3804

Re: A Chemical Mishap - A 'Male Reader x Pokémon' Fanfic

Let's continue with what I'm willing to bet money on is the plot of several mind-control fetish hentai pornos. Here's Chapter 4, Breaking Up A Fight. You're in over your head. It's okay, author. It's okay. The sex scene ended last chapter. You can stop now. When you first considered hoarding all th...
by ConcernedGamer
Tue Oct 22, 2019 3:33 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9565

Re: Inside Falls

Part 2 of Chapter 19 starts here. ~~ Later... As a part of the instructions suggested,the Dreemurr youngsters turned off the lights in the living room and ignited enough candles to surrounded the couch where Pearl,no longer making bizzare motions and moaning in pain,was still sleeping. "So,what are...
by ConcernedGamer
Tue Oct 22, 2019 3:32 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9565

Re: Inside Falls

This was a chore to chew through. I'll state it plainly. The more inane the choices this author makes in her non-altering changes to the canon, the more insufferable and demotivating it is to even give it any acknowledgement. Here's Chapter 19, Nightbandits. It was a kind of surprisingly rainy day ...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Oct 07, 2019 4:01 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: A Chemical Mishap - A 'Male Reader x Pokémon' Fanfic
Replies: 4
Views: 3804

Re: A Chemical Mishap - A 'Male Reader x Pokémon' Fanfic

The sex scene hasn't stopped yet, you may have noticed. It's not like there was any pretense that it would, or that this fanfic would contain anything else. I'm just in general disappointed that it makes itself horribly generic, where every sex scene almost comes across as a template of the previou...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Sep 16, 2019 11:37 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9565

Re: Inside Falls

We are nearing the season finale, where the author hopefully can dust off her brain and find some creativity by shoving another crossover character in our face to produce the overarching plot-relevant villain. Until then, we get the same story with a different dinosaur, delivered yet again without ...
by ConcernedGamer
Tue Sep 03, 2019 4:04 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9565

Re: Inside Falls

Sometimes, once on a blue moon, there comes a turnabout whenever I read a bad fanfic, where I suddenly against the odds find something to like about it. It's brief, it's surprising, it's almost worse than had I never seen it in the first place, because it never truly manages to last for long. Here'...
by ConcernedGamer
Tue Sep 03, 2019 3:55 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy
Replies: 80
Views: 25901

Re: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy

I'm almost certain I must be repeating myself along the way in this rant, but this just has to get off my chest at this point, especially after this chapter. I feel like I've had the revelation of a lifetime in mulling over the author's way of narrating and producing his so called plot and action in...