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by ConcernedGamer
Sun May 12, 2019 4:37 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9564

Re: Inside Falls

The author is really pissing me off with how these Dreemurr twins are being portrayed purer than fresh snow, while at the same time unintentionally coming off as mental cases worth three different kinds of meds. This has led me to dedicating a seperate page in the chapter link section to laying out...
by ConcernedGamer
Thu Apr 18, 2019 4:49 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9564

Re: Inside Falls

Part 2 post start here, previous part is just above. --- "Well,Temmie,lets help Pearl face off her Acrophobia. Also know as Operation PFOHA.", Because calling it LPPFHOA would have made it sound dirty. Frisk said for Temmie,showing to her a 'map' on the general plan,and many other alternate plans i...
by ConcernedGamer
Thu Apr 18, 2019 4:47 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9564

Re: Inside Falls

We are ten chapters into this, with no deviation from a different but identical Gravity Falls plot railroad, with characters that don't act like who they are supposed to be, don't act like the characters they are replacing, or don't act like people in general. The fact that they act is dubious at b...
by ConcernedGamer
Sat Apr 13, 2019 7:31 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy
Replies: 80
Views: 25901

Re: Yugioh: The Divine Conspiracy

I typically find myself morbidly fascinated whenever I mock a fanfic with sex scenes in them, wondering at first what I'm in for, even when it's made by an author I've already seen produce some before, like here. Sometimes it's evidently so bland and note for note repeats of insert Peg A into Slot B...
by ConcernedGamer
Sun Mar 31, 2019 8:39 am
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9564

Re: Inside Falls

Who doesn't enjoy a good time travel plot? They are however not without their issues, of course. Gravity Falls introduced a light-hearted take on the topic, where mostly the implications and/or complications were glossed over. Introducing time travel can lend a whole lot of plot holes and issues ab...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Mar 18, 2019 1:57 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9564

Re: Inside Falls

the other half here. Stay strong, the stupid is not over yet. Pearl was still in the stocks,forcing to listen to a dialogue of the lady that married a male wigeon and her husband,and hoping for someone to help her get out of there. She was about to sleep when someone poked her nose. "Oh-hoh! It is ...
by ConcernedGamer
Mon Mar 18, 2019 1:56 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9564

Re: Inside Falls

This story is stuck. Stuck in an AU, stuck in the canon, stuck in the author's mind from which it barely escapes with grammar and details enough to be coherent. I refuse to believe that the popularity of Undertale AUs stems from the thought that you can just rebrand a story while changing nothing a...
by ConcernedGamer
Sat Mar 02, 2019 12:58 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9564

Re: Inside Falls

Continuing Chapter 7. Chara and Deux thumbed up,before Deux began to distribute the tickets rightly,and Chara went to Lapis,to ask to dance with her. I've already wasted my Murder Dance reference in an earlier chapter, so instead I'm going to lament my ire at this being a Human AU Steven Universe c...
by ConcernedGamer
Sat Mar 02, 2019 12:55 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Inside Falls
Replies: 30
Views: 9564

Re: Inside Falls

I understand how you feel; there are times where I struggle to come up with jokes and witty commentary for my mock of Divine Conspiracy. Best thing to do is to put it on hold for a few days or so, and you'll feel more refreshed when you get back to it. Well, true to your word, I did feel refreshed ...
by ConcernedGamer
Thu Jan 31, 2019 4:26 pm
Forum: Shitposting, Parodies and Dumb Shit
Topic: Jet's Universe
Replies: 21
Views: 6836

Re: Jet's Universe

And Jet's Universe makes a return worse than a hangnail. My memory of this isn't even that faint, because the author has done nothing to create anything original when it comes to self-insertion, and anything he has managed to inject fails deliberately at altering the canon. The author manages to ma...